School
School can be hard
But if you don't go to school you could end up bared
But in the long run its worth all the pain
because you could grow up and have all the fame
School can be hard
But if you don't go to school you could end up bared
But in the long run its worth all the pain
because you could grow up and have all the fame
I am trying to tell you that even though school may be hard, and embarrassing at moments. You need it. Like i said in the second line, if your not educated you could end up in prison or worse dead. In the long run school is good (last line)
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It's OK. Some things to clarify.
I think the last word of the first line has to be a name. Not sure, but I think so.
Also, I think a clerihew should be humorous. It's OK if it isn't.
OK. Now to just the poem.It's meaningful and nice to read. Makes sense, and easy to see what to see what you're thinking.
The initiative is clear.
Important points? Most of what you need is there, other than a few points. A great "rough" copy, and could almost be a hard copy. Nice job!
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