LOVE
Is love a treacherous fairytale?
Is Love Meant to destroy and hurt us all?
Can a man or women love a snail?
Can a humans relationship fall?
Is love the basis of success and fail?
Is the feeling of love like a big ball ?
Love is the basis of Life and Friendship
It is what drives us to get through our day
It is what rouses us to go unzip
It is in everyone even if their gay
It is in every child and animal
It raises our strength and our morale
It is our present, and our past, and its legit
Love is our life, It's our sole, lets keep it
Is Love Meant to destroy and hurt us all?
Can a man or women love a snail?
Can a humans relationship fall?
Is love the basis of success and fail?
Is the feeling of love like a big ball ?
Love is the basis of Life and Friendship
It is what drives us to get through our day
It is what rouses us to go unzip
It is in everyone even if their gay
It is in every child and animal
It raises our strength and our morale
It is our present, and our past, and its legit
Love is our life, It's our sole, lets keep it
3 comments:
sam,
in the first stanza you met the requiremnts while still devolping ameaningful poem. good job.
in the 2nd stanza you kept the 10 syllable and iambic pentameter but what happened to the rhyme scheme?
right now it goes ababcdefghijkl
sam,
in the first stanza you met the requiremnts while still devolping ameaningful poem. good job.
in the 2nd stanza you kept the 10 syllable and iambic pentameter but what happened to the rhyme scheme?
right now it goes ababcdefghijkl
sam,
in the first stanza you met the requirements while still devolping ameaningful poem. good job.
in the 2nd stanza you kept the 10 syllable and iambic pentameter but what happened to the rhyme scheme?
right now it goes ababcdefghijkl
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