My house is like a Gallery
Each Painting Speaks to Me, Talks to me
Tells me secrets from the past
A past so full of history
Sculptures dance and whisper as if they were alive
Every corner has a mystery
Every thought has a process
Every colour has a purpose
Every painting that is featured
has a connection with me in many ways
When its light and when its dark
I see the art
Calming me, comforting me
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5 comments:
samuel how do you see the art when its dark??
And ya thats kinda true, you have a ton of art in your house, like that one above the door going into that like greenhouse place.
Good lines are: "Tells me secrets from the past, A past so full of history" and "Sculptures dance and whisper as if they were alive"
I like it, I thinks it abstract and original. I like how you give your house personification.
I like how u talked about your house comforting you
Thats wat a house should do
i like how you made your house live
Reid
I also like the way your house lives sam i think that you could use a bit more imagery tell me more about the art. maybe where it says sculptures you vould right like what they are made of and name the ways they connect to you other than that though cool poem
jamie
Thanks for your comments guys
sam
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